Keep refining the first few lines, never go with the first draft.
The title must be meaningful, or at the least clickbait,
After laying the groundwork, for the prey you silently wait.
That they've scrolled beyond the 1st para, is a victory of sorts,
You've managed to snatch their attention, from reels and shorts.
The first impression made, you can now relax a bit,
They'll at least read the poem, if not make it a hit.
With 7 seconds you made a promise, now for 7 minutes time to deliver,
Let them not just read, but reflect, with each arrow from your quiver.
To make them think and brood, is a poetical art,
To catch their fancy and eyes, just act I, first part.
The first 7 seconds are crucial, the last 7 more so,
Beyond the lasting impressions, the poem should linger and grow.
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